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Re: Favorite SOng
Awake, I love Never too Late too! Its awesome!! Second Hand Serenade is awesome too, I love Fall for You :D
Aug 14, 2009 -
Re: Arian (a sort've long short story)
A story I thought of randomly and took maybe...about a week to write. I know its long and if its too long I would really appreciate it if you let ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: The Four Seasons. Ch1
Hey there spike71294! First I'd like to point out that I liked your story! But I noticed some things: I don't care if my vest and my torn denim get ...
Aug 5, 2009 -
Re: Favorite SOng
Being the music addict I am its hard to have a favortie song but amazingly I do have them! Any 3 Doors Down song I am in LOVE with! I ...
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Musical Personna??? Twilight Characters??? Disney Channel???
Hey there! Haha that was awesome! I loved it!! I noticed 2 things though: *EDWARD disapeares* I believe you mean, disappears And you didn't capitalize some of the beginning of ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Hope - A mother's tale
Hey there PP! I'm Irish! I'm on your team for the game show thing, and let me say, glad to have you onboard! We have an awesome team :D Ok ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Detention
That was pretty funny! I always love your plays Snoink, they're hilarious! But I thought the supervisor was a man? In the script you said it was a woman....or did ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Haha that was EPIC! You killed Jacob and kicked Edward right in the worst place for a dude! Your my idol! Nate and Bella? lol Nate was right to run! ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Meep wants her money back to buy a Cheeseburger!
Haha that was EPIC! You killed Jacob and kicked Edward right in the worst place for a dude! Your my idol! Nate and Bella? lol Nate was right to run! ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: The execution
Hahaha! I can totally see Monty Python doing that! It actually reminds me of the stoning scene in Life of Brian! Haha funny :lol:
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: A Stranger in Seoul
Hey Mazo! Time for a team critique!! WEE!! Ok here we go! Grammar: This alone was enough to make her an item of interest to Kim Jaejoong's class, and as ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Afternoon Missions
Hey there Hannah! So, I'll first point out grammar, then certain things in the story I noticed, then just overall. My second crack at critique here we go... Grammar: I ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Purple's Hints!
Hah! When I saw the title of this I didn't get it, but now I do! That was funny! Favorite line : Jimmy- It's... (Marie glares at him) Never mind ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Purple's Hints!
Hah! When I saw the title of this I didn't get it, but now I do! That was funny! Favorite line : Jimmy- It's... (Marie glares at him) Never mind ...
Jul 30, 2009 -
Re: Little Macey
Woe :shock: That was really cool! Great job! I only saw one thing that I didn't really understand: They would know that she knew if she did. That doesn't really ...
Jul 29, 2009
