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Well, fireflight asked to be the girl first, but if she/he changes her mind, then sure, Lilliana can be it. :) Although I was thinking more along the lines of ...

Before the apple fell, We believed in a color-book world With outlines pre-drawn, coherent. Broad sketches in case our fumbling fingers Should reach outside the lines. We believed in black ...

This is very vague, and kind of difficult to comprehend. By the time that we realize that we are nothing more then words and over thought expressions, to repress our ...

You get a free coin, since you seem in need of one. ;) *inserts coin*

Wow, I didn't read Morgan's profile before, and I just realized how similar I made Validen's...down to the very age. o.0 Anyways... Validen It is always in the most peaceful ...

Wow. Usually when I see a piece of this length, I skim through a bit, get the gist of things, then turn away. But this actually made me want to ...

I think an antagonist is needed here. ;) Name: (Sir)Validen Gender: Male Age: 35 Rank (knight, peasant, etc.): Ex-knight, an outlaw Appearance:Shining blond hair that he's grown shoulder length. Surpr

I like the idea. Like the others said, though, it's a bit too simplistic. I would also work on the overall rhythm of the piece: some lines, for example the ...

This is a very sweet poem, to say the least. It's also very readable, another good thing to have. First, just to nit-pick a little: In the first line, the ...

Good idea. Would Kaywiia like to do the honors? ;) Or anyone who wants, of course.

The sky has stopped its raining today. And we are walking further and further away from the creations of people, though in this day, it gets harder and harder to ...

Nice poem! i would say that the best part about this poem is the rhyming. Unlike a lot of poems, I think you managed to follow your rhyme scheme very ...

Hi! First: I think you meant hopped off my bed? Alright. This piece sounds more like a rant than an actual poem. You could definitely make a great piece of ...

Hey, am i still in this? My character was with you guys at first...

Vashi Asides from the qualms of homesickness, I could not say that this was too bad. The people here were no better and no worse than everyone else, each with ...