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Claws of fire distending from her emerald back My Arizona lies beneath the white speck of sun Whose icy blades pierce the glitter of her veins, Green and gold beneath ...

If you're not feeling depressed, then there is no need to pretend you are--poems don't need to be depressing to be emotional! Write about what you're truly thinking and feeling, ...

Let's fix some grammar points: He who has been eaten by anger, Sticking his pride out like a finger ; No mercy will be drawn out of him, Singing like ...

Sorry, posted twice.

Would this be related to Black Beauty? (I'm referencing the only literature about horses I know). I see a lot of potential here. But there are some confusing elements, as ...

Simple and sweet. I like these very much. Since your title for these is "blurbs", are you planning on expanding from here? They all look like they can be great ...

Polished peel rounds a burnished burst Of hybridized cloying Clementine An oblong spheroid in curving orbit Between and beneath the creviced terrain (Still foreign to the heels of time) Of ...

Creative. The best ideas can come from the most random things :) Certainly very good questions to ask a pitcher. I enjoyed the smooth transition from slightly comical to much ...

Hey, would this be inspired by Train's "Drops of Jupiter", by any chance? Anyways, lovely poem here. Strong and effective imagery, especially the first two lines (though watch out for ...

Thank you very much for taking your time to review this. Your comments were quite helpful. :)

As an American, I'm not really familiar with the Canadian Women's suffrage movements, so I can't offer any comments on historical accuracy and the like. On the writing though, I ...

I loved this!The ending was certainly a snappy surprise, especially since your beginning made it seem like it would be something a bit more serious. The imagery is great--you really ...

Same situation, welcome back to you! :) Congratulations to you, and this is a very nice little poem to celebrate. As Lumi said, watch out for some little nit-picky things. ...

I do not remember how I came hence, into this pitted earth--entrenched And caked in dust revered as bones, enwreathed in matted undertones, Repeating, since embryo, since fetal light--repeating a ...

First things first, the second line is grammatically incorrect. You might want to replace "no ordinary" with "unordinary" or something of the like. Second, though the poem itself flowed very ...