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It's definitely very sweet. The repetition about the gleam in his eye served its purpose well. I would suggests some changes in grammar, such as capitalizing Moonshine and watching out ...

Vashi Something screamed. That jolted me out of my lovely clouds and back into reality. I continued to lay where I was, until the feel of the sand and the ...

Vashi My body shook with relief when I heard the sounds of the leaves after that loud, dreadful silence. If I had lost my hearing too, I would be lost ...

Wow, I've read enough poems that can create beautiful images, but I think this is the first one that's also done the same with smells and tastes.

Thanks everyone, for the welcomes and the reviews. :) You guys are right about the last stanza--I wasn't sure what to do with it so I kind of just got ...

Dandelion The dandelion that I’ve blown has carried away my life. One for wishes, Two for needs, Three for wantings, Four for cares. Guided up by magnetic skies Beyond the ...

Light plays on rooftops, life plays below A desperate race for an ending unknown. Light runs unfettered, haloing clouds, An immortal childhood since the ages of old. Life thinks too ...

Vashi Anand Age: 15 Height: 5'6 Picture: thick black hair, dark skin, not extremely gorgeous at first glance, but not exactly ugly. Personality: Very much caught up in her own ...