ireylcadence

Wow, I usually don't go for love poems, but this one was excellent. every season was an accomplice. The paths were invitations, that led to eminence. Very nice. Two things: ...

Haha, I thought the ellipsis was the poem at first, and I "liked" it for your very clever idea. And then I read retrodisco's comment and realized. Silly me. But, ...

I actually liked this quite much, which surprised me because I'm generally not too fond of "angsty" pieces, even if it is only faked angst. However, your imagery was very ...

This completely brightened up my day, no joke. Some light poetry, I love it! Just a few things. Your meter/rhythm was quite good at the beginning, but then it started ...

No enlightened poet am I proclaimed, Rhyming high-flown philosophies in poesy, (Instead, I only scratch out my words In verses of winds and the scents of spring-- Of the shades ...

His hands still seared by the thorough stab of the winter’s chill, he gripped his rattling fingers tightly over the sterilized doorknob, checking once again the room number before allowing ...

Last-minute homework assignment. I'm scared to read what I wrote. How many times have you found yourself at a party where the only people you even slightly know are the ...

Musical inspiration is the best. :) Your imagery is wow, simply wow. It's been a long time since I've come across something on YWS that was so beautifully worded, nice ...

In the most interior halls Of grandfather, opa, Herr Uberlebende His mind Behind the film that shrouds his eyes (Fading, opaque, impenetrable) There is a gap between the rooms that ...

First of all, wow, what a coincidence, I've been writing a series of vignettes on a deluded hobo woman traveling with her dog named Averice. I'm rather fond of vagabonds ...

I knew it. You write beautifully. This seems so perfect for the holiday season especially. I was looking for a nitpick but I honestly could not find one. So this ...

Oohh, interesting title, attention-grabbing. And a poem that makes you think and has deeper, implicit meaning? Very nice. I had to read this a couple of times to make sense ...

Austria? You learned to ski in Austria??? So lucky. :) Beautiful, such an interesting story, I honestly couldn't stop. Especially the part about getting off the ski lift early; you ...

Very creative. It's not often we get to hear poetry from the viewpoint of a tiger :) I'm having some trouble with the syntax of your sentences here--while in terms ...

Wonderful poem, you've certainly got the lyricism down. :) Usually a poem of that length would scare me away, but this was so readable that I had to continue. Good ...