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Thanks for the review! I did mean for the "addressee" to seem as though they were floating in the air, but I wasn't sure how to go about explaining that ...

Yeah, I have trouble with expanding on the ideas in poems because I tend to use too many words and I can't figure out the right words to make it ...

Ah, but capitalization isn't necessary in poetry! ;) :P But nah, I didn't capitalize subsequent lines where a sentence hadn't ended, that's all. Thanks for the review! ^_^

"from whence they come" was meant to refer to the glass and wood and such that was falling out of the sky, but I can see how it may have ...