innerbeauty555

Is it a rock song? Yeah, it's like a pop rock for most of it, but it gets into a crazy, rocking-out guitar part at the "oxymoron" verse (or bridge? ...

I liked this poem. It makes a clear point--that you are who you are. I think that's awesome! Keep it up! :) -*-*--Diana--*-*-

I agree! This is great! I would like to hear how the music goes, too, because there are so many ways it could go. --Di :)

Hello! My name is Diana (or Di, if you prefer), and I am 13 years old. Some of you know me from TYWC as Redheaded Queen of All Grammar (or, ...

I look in the mirror, And who's the girl I see? Thank goodness that she's me, And me is me is me. Her smile shines, From the inside out, And ...

Overall, I liked this. The first verse was kind of choppy, though. "You can't valse"? I looked that up. In Webster's it's a type of waltz, in American Heritage it ...

I cannot feel your pain; I guess I am too happy. Don't tell me what I say, Is "totally sappy". If you have a problem, With who I am, That's ...

Oh, oh, oh Perfectly flawless In every regard But your words cut Like a shark tooth shard Doesn't make any sense It couldn't commence 'Cause it's false You can't valse ...

You had excellent rhythm in this song. I liked it very much. I think in the first line of the fifth stanza, though, you meant "too well" instead of "to ...

I really don't know much about song critiquing, but I just wanted to say this is really good. I can relate to it 100%. I think it was well written, ...

I disagree about the last two lines rhyming. I think it is good. Sometimes, I do that, too, and it seems to fit this poem. I think it makes the ...

I agree with most of the comments made. This was excellent. It's very sweet. Keep writing! :) -*-*--Diana--*-*-

I didn't like the line breaks, either. It was way too broken up that way. I couldn't even concentrate on the poem. --Di :)

It was good for the most part. Watch your punctuation, though. I know it's up to you, but I would suggest using more commas at the end of your lines. ...

I don't celebrate holidays.