innerbeauty555

Ah, NaNoWriMo...the insanity...THE INSANITY! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (It hasn't even begun yet! :-P) Seriously, I haven't the foggiest idea what to write about. I am going to m

Mystery all the way, man. Diana :)

I said pace because I love to build intensity and such in my stories, but I like characterization and interesting plots, too. I like to have a lot of different ...

Yeah, I'm not too sure I liked it. It seemed too plain to me. If you really want to write a poem about sports, be more descriptive. You need to ...

or close the phone, and I act like I care but I don't. I know every exit leads to another stage, I don't know if you did this on purpose ...

Ha ha ha. You're exposed, You and your pack of wolves, So don't throw me your dirty looks, Because now everyone sees them. Everyone knows all the harm you've done, ...

This is sweet. I have a weak spot for friendship poems. It needs a little work (expand, more description, etc.), but it's still pretty good. Keep writing. :-) -*-*--Diana--*-*-

i have written music to go with it, so i have to use slang so it goes with the music You still say "looking", "'cause", and "I", so that makes ...

I liked this poem a lot, too, but I agree with the person who said they didn't like the title. Perhaps you should change it to "Paint Me a Picture"? ...

I don't understand this; Please explain, Why you must put me, Through all this pain. All I want to do, Is talk to you, But how can I? You won't ...

Wow. This is a good piece. I liked the words you used here. I would recommend you capitalize your "i"'s, though. I also think you should combine the first two ...

Spelling/Grammar: "therer" in the first line should be "there". In the second line, you want the "their" kind of the word, not "there". "Their" shows possession. You need a question ...

Firestarter got most of the corrections I was going to make as far as spelling goes. I think on the "I some", you meant "In some" (type-o, probably ;-)). I ...

You can tell me how to fix my work when you write it. Thank you, Goodnight Hello? Why did you post this here with that kind of attitude? That is ...

I don't know What's going on In your head But I know you know very well That's not what I said Spreading rumors Tasteless lies What did I ever do ...