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Hapless shades of silkscreened past, glowing off tubes in parallel windows, saturating puddles on asphalt canvas. My motions mirroring subtle characters of varied hues leaking into the screen or out; ...

Oh my god! That is THE coolest thing I've seen on this site before. I'm exaggerating, but still, the fact that you actually recorded yourself reciting this poem and then ...

This is quite a refreshing poem, on a subject I haven't seen in poetry before. First I'm going to get out of the way my nitpicks. Fist of which is ...

Did you happen to watch the Egypt Sunday specials on Green Planet this weekend? :) I'm going to start by mentioning what I believe to be your strongest aspect in ...

You don't think that it creates duel meaning? Happiness is (exists, stands alone) + happiness is this (specific). It also gives the effect of hesitation, or uncertainty in my opinion. ...

This is brilliant! You have a lovely way with words, to be sure. I can't say how accurate it is to a 1954 supermarket though, yet you still took me ...

I met her that day Cold, windy, a breath sucking life from my lungs shriveled at the sight Beautiful, majestic, on a MamaLama was right, in that this comes off ...

"This brain is so new It's hard to control." Wonderful couplet. :) OK, so your poem is stemming from suffering, and gets really cathartic at points. That's good, and you ...

The title, like someone else said, is very nice, and is what drew me to your poem. I feel like you really struck a chord with this poem. The statements ...

The paragon of posterity: faked suicides in one hundred forty characters or less, always less. One hundred forty acts of heroism, slaying the beast of boredom.

Faceless cannon fodder: two million, four hundred eighty thousand, three hundred thirty-five - dead, according to the government, according to Wikipedia, according to myself, according to my therapist

It's nice of you to clear this up for some of the users here. I hadn't realized that it was in such misuse.

This is nice. I didn't get anything deep from it, but the format is very lyrical and I hope you write some music for this. It could benefit from some ...