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Thanks for the review! I just want to say that whenever you review me, you don't have to assure me I'm a good writer after every bit of criticism. I ...

First off, thanks for the review, but I would like to clarify some of the questions you asked. I argued with my stepfather instead of caring. My basement is a ...

Thanks for the review! If I end up revising this, I'll tag you.

I read your review (obviously, otherwise I wouldn't be commenting on this). I noticed that you feel that God gives human lives a meaning and morals. I can see how ...

I didn't realize that English was your second language. You write more clearly and with better grammar than many native speakers I know and have even reviewed on here. I'm ...

No problem!

But then you're back where you started. The entire reason you turned to God was because the earth needed an origin. God essentially is the Big Bang, only one is ...

I know this will probably irritate you, but I can't resist asking. Where did God come from? Does God have a God? Does God's God have a God? If the ...

I'll definitely tag you in edits! I think the reason I took so long on the strawberries, is that it is one of my strongest memories of that time. Just ...

yeah, I actually considered doing that for this poem, because I could make it prettier that way. But I was lazy and just wanted to post it, so I didn't ...

Thanks for the kind comment!

Two stanzas? It's showing up as 8 plus that one italicized line for me. That's weird and slightly upsetting (YWS formatting makes me so mad sometimes) Anyway, thanks for the ...

I know that you may have been hurt due to my criticism. However, reviews on YWS require constructive criticism. I know it seems harsh, but criticism will help you become ...

It's fine. But remember that reviews are where people share their opinions and try to help writers. I just shared my opinion, and tried to help you. I know that ...