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Re: Scolopendra
so you would do that within the work? (sorry I know I'm probably making things more complicated than they should be)
Jan 7, 2017 -
Re: Scolopendra
How do you tag someone?
Jan 7, 2017 -
Re: Scolopendra
Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it. When I edit, I'll definitely take your suggestions. Aurren is really different from our world (mainly so I can get ...
Jan 7, 2017 -
Re: Scolopendra
Thanks so much for your review. When I first started to read it I was afraid that you thought it wasn't very good. (Not to say that your observationz were ...
Jan 6, 2017 -
Re: Burning Bridges
I can't answer most of your questions because when I wrote this I didn't consider backstory at all or even why the brother killed Eliza. As for the step mother, ...
Jan 3, 2017 -
Re: Burning Bridges
Yeah, looking back gasoline was a bad choice considering I imagined it to be the mid-1800s. But I wrote it in 8th grade so what can you do? I really ...
Dec 31, 2016 -
Re: Burning Bridges
I feel pretty flattered that you think that this story is fairly strong because it really is an early work for me. I actually wrote it for school in 8th ...
Dec 31, 2016 -
Re: A Bad Feeling
Thanks for the review! I wrote this a year ago for a contest (that I actually placed in which was cool) The abrupt ending was because of a page limit. ...
Dec 30, 2016 -
Re: A Bad Feeling
Thanks for the review! I wrote this about a year ago for a contest with a page limit so I totally agree with you on the ending. (I won 2nd ...
Dec 30, 2016
