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Re: Off Court - Chapter 7.1
Hey, Bisc! Storm here to finally get around to reviewing this chapter, so let's jump right into it! Again, he bounced it, and again. A bit clunky. I think it's ...
Jul 10, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.3
Hey Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! First, he meets Natalie, and now a whole bunch of other really good tennis players! You do ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.2
Hey, Bisc! Storm here a bit late to do a review, but let's jump right into it! Somebody brushed past me as I said this, clipping my shoulder and nearly ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.1
Hey, Bisc! Storm here to do a review, as promised, so let's jump right into it! The Netherlands are great. This sentence goes into the realm of uncertanity regarding tense. ...
Jun 30, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 5
Hey, Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! In fact, we stuck to this plan so well that the next time I saw him was ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 4.2
Hey, Bisc! I wish I could have gotten to this sooner (and gotten those sweet, sweet 25 points extra), but as you know, my internet decided to leave me, but ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 4.1
Yo Bisc! Sorry for taking so long to get to this, but you know how life is. Anyway, it's time for a long overdue review! “Yes, we’ve kissed,” I said, ...
Jun 24, 2017 -
Re: Compendium: Prologue
Hey, UFO! Storm here for a review, as promised, so let's jump right into it! I'm going to be honest here, the first thing I noticed was your grammar issues. ...
Jun 16, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 3.2
Hi, Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! She’d be worried sick – or being sick. Your verb tense or something is wrong here. It ...
Jun 15, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 3.1
Hey Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! Given my general reluctance to leave France – and my mum’s – we decided to hang around ...
Jun 14, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 2.2
Hey, Bisquick! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! This review is probably going to be a bit short because there's not a whole lot of ...
Jun 5, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 2.1
Hey, Bisc! I thought that I would get to this sooner, but I didn't (I'm a lazy procrastinator, sue me). With that said, let's jump right into this! “Yes, Camillo, ...
Jun 4, 2017 -
Re: Off Court - Chapter 1
Hey, Bisquick! Storm here for the review I promised, so let's jump right into it. So it seems like Leo (I'm just going to ignore the accent so reviewing will ...
May 29, 2017 -
Re: My Perfect Match
Hey, Bisc. Storm here for a review this fine review day, so let's jump right into it. I really liked this. I think you did some good things here; you ...
May 28, 2017 -
Re: The Memories Tattooed On His Skin (MTOHS) - Chapter 1.1 OLD
Hey, SpiritedWolfe. Storm here for a review this fine review day, so let's jump right into it! You really threw us into the thick of things. I am a firm ...
May 28, 2017
