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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 7.1

    Hey, Bisc! Storm here to finally get around to reviewing this chapter, so let's jump right into it! Again, he bounced it, and again. A bit clunky. I think it's ...

    Jul 10, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.3

    Hey Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! First, he meets Natalie, and now a whole bunch of other really good tennis players! You do ...

    Jul 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.2

    Hey, Bisc! Storm here a bit late to do a review, but let's jump right into it! Somebody brushed past me as I said this, clipping my shoulder and nearly ...

    Jul 6, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 6.1

    Hey, Bisc! Storm here to do a review, as promised, so let's jump right into it! The Netherlands are great. This sentence goes into the realm of uncertanity regarding tense. ...

    Jun 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 5

    Hey, Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! In fact, we stuck to this plan so well that the next time I saw him was ...

    Jun 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 4.2

    Hey, Bisc! I wish I could have gotten to this sooner (and gotten those sweet, sweet 25 points extra), but as you know, my internet decided to leave me, but ...

    Jun 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 4.1

    Yo Bisc! Sorry for taking so long to get to this, but you know how life is. Anyway, it's time for a long overdue review! “Yes, we’ve kissed,” I said, ...

    Jun 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Compendium: Prologue

    Hey, UFO! Storm here for a review, as promised, so let's jump right into it! I'm going to be honest here, the first thing I noticed was your grammar issues. ...

    Jun 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 3.2

    Hi, Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! She’d be worried sick – or being sick. Your verb tense or something is wrong here. It ...

    Jun 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Other Re: Off Court - Chapter 3.1

    Hey Bisc! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! Given my general reluctance to leave France – and my mum’s – we decided to hang around ...

    Jun 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 2.2

    Hey, Bisquick! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! This review is probably going to be a bit short because there's not a whole lot of ...

    Jun 5, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 2.1

    Hey, Bisc! I thought that I would get to this sooner, but I didn't (I'm a lazy procrastinator, sue me). With that said, let's jump right into this! “Yes, Camillo, ...

    Jun 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Off Court - Chapter 1

    Hey, Bisquick! Storm here for the review I promised, so let's jump right into it. So it seems like Leo (I'm just going to ignore the accent so reviewing will ...

    May 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: My Perfect Match

    Hey, Bisc. Storm here for a review this fine review day, so let's jump right into it. I really liked this. I think you did some good things here; you ...

    May 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Memories Tattooed On His Skin (MTOHS) - Chapter 1.1 OLD

    Hey, SpiritedWolfe. Storm here for a review this fine review day, so let's jump right into it! You really threw us into the thick of things. I am a firm ...

    May 28, 2017


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