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Hey Lauren :) Welcome to YWS. Here is a gift :D *passes over a Redbull* Members are asked to post 2 reviews before any of their own works :) So ...

Hey Medusa :) *Passes exciting newbie a Redbull* Nice work on introducing yourself :) I listen to pretty much the same type of music as you...Love it all, lol. Anyway, ...

That's wrong. Something's wrong with our heads...:( Maybe our youth are being more and more affected by the negativity in this modern world... I'd hate to think of the things ...

Hello :) You have a lovely name =) Please PM me anytime you need to, and check out the FAQ's in the Welcome forum :) *Gives newbie with the nice ...

Hello :) Welcome the coolest site ever =) *Showers newbie with Redbull* Feel free to PM me anytime for any question, and you can always head over to the FAQ's ...

Hey :) Ok, firstly, long...... Maybe breaking it into 2 parts? Just a few things ;) We float, my dear, we float. And the sleeping caddisfly ventures Ever nearer to ...

Hi Adna :) Beautiful work... A few things :) I don't quite understand what the bell has to do with the voice being beautiful. After the toll of the bell, ...

Hey :) It was ok until this bit : A memory I tried to erase Like that birthday that went wrong But I still got the presents So I smiled ...

God! *prays* Lol, sorry couldn't resist. :P About the poem - very, very nice. Like V said, mellow. Calming...smooth. I do have a small problem with how 'common' these things ...

My feelings for you have gone, Banished forever as if never born, Never again shall they ever show, Lest I risk destroying my soul. Very nice. Short. But forceful. Never ...

Hey :) First off, the font you have used is hard to read. Don't let the reader strain their eyes. :) Secondly, I just want to point out a few ...

Thanks Alainna :) I can see you what you mean about the half a minute thing. :)

:) Lovely first poem. Let's see if we can make it better. First off, I think you've should fix the rhyme pattern. If you have rhyme you need to keep ...

A gasp of bewilderment breathed from my mouth. Slowly I took in my surroundings, turning my head around in amazement, and my memories came trickling back to me rapidly. The ...

I understand it is short. :) I didn't want a long story and this is only one part, not necessarily a chapter. I hope that each part will be inconsistent ...