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I disagree with you on one point. Sexuality IS beautiful! Knowing who you are, knowing where you stand...what isn't moving about that? I embrace my hetersexuality, just as another can ...

Hey Peche :) I like your username. =) Ah, novelist...lol. Well, I'm more for poetry but I'd love to see some of your work posted :D Feel free to PM ...

*The grammatical errors are intended. I have tried to punctuate it as well as possible...gangsta style? I'm experimenting with different styles...please critique. :)* My brother – he say ‘Never to

Ah k well, fair enough. guy13, if you want I don't mind correcting dialogue, etc so the others can enjoy your work as well. Just PM :D Talk soon Inky

Thanks guys :) Well...no, I've haven't thought about publishing as yet. And the "My eyes painted walls from the insides of my world. " bit meant to show a closed ...

:) Hey... Ok, first thing's first. Did you mean to spell everything incorrectly? Also the punctuation is non-existant in some areas, :). It's short...and I really have no feelings for ...

Nice :) Just one thing... The first stanza is saying Take my words... but the second is saying the opposite... Ignore me . Was this intentional? Otherwise it's a beautiful ...

Hey :) Just a few things... YES! Caps is really not necessary. That's what an exclamation mark is for. :) I rolled my eyes Hmm...I think you have used this ...

8/10 lol i think your kitten is overly tired and about to kill you u :D

*This is a poem about a love that is all too familiar* You walk alone there, down the street through chilled air. Get home, hop into bed, blankets up over ...

Very nice :) Anyone in the same situation can immediately relate. It's so simple and child-like but so full of emotion... I'm surprised how well this last bit flows. It ...

Beautiful...:) I agree with JC...This is perfect length. I've never really been into romance but I thought this was wonderful. The only thing I can see a slight problem with ...

Wow... Honestly, I'm confused. The fears of every sweater vest wearing, popular instrumental listening, and curfew at 10:00 sharp conservative home owning association parent, showed its fun hungry hea

Ah :) Fair enough lol. V :P Inky

Hey Jade :) Welcome to YWS. This is a wonderful site, especially if you've just started exploring the wonderful world of creative writing and the likes. You might get alot ...