ink_on_fire

wow... Wierd lol. But i loved it. You can portray an awesome picture :) Love this work... :) V

Lol, hey :) Yeh, Australia is pretty good. I like ur sig ;) haha Peace V :P

Perhaps you like the fear; The pain, the crime, the sin. Perhaps it makes it clear; The name, the right, the kin. Perhaps a silent cry at birth Would haunt ...

Hi, The first and second photos are amazing. The second is breathtaking. I adore it. It really has feelings...:) The flower ones are a little out of focus and blurred, ...

Flipping creepy :D ahha, well thankyou :)

OMG, I love the use of positive and negative space. So natural. Beautiful work. Peace V :)

Hey, Im ink_on_fire, I used to be wildlove100% ages ago..years ago. But i've started afresh and thought I'd say hi... :roll: um yeh

Welcome to YWS :) First off, new members are asked to post 2 reviews before any of their own works. Secondly, I already know you will all love this poem, ...

I'm guessing the poem's about someone called 'you'.:) Unique :) You don’t just look at me, You see me. You don’t just see me, You read me. You don’t just ...

Hey Welcome to YWS :) Hmm, I'm not sure of the rhythm of this poem. It reads like poetry, but poetry needs a flowing, workable structure...whether that's a flowing rhythm ...

...breathtaking. I loved it. You have beautiful imagery, and it captures the reader's attention so well. Only one spelling mistake that I could see :) [s] He [/s] His father, ...

Hey Lucy, nice poem. It's very emo, but when you think bout it, everyone feels like this at least once in their lifetime :) A trickle of blood Ran down ...

Hmm, all I thought about was the Go, go, go bit. Snagged me and I have to admit, I didnt enjoy reading it from thereon. But you have rhythm :) ...

Nice :) I think you meant my instead of might Hands tighten round might throat Perhaps some punctuation at the end of some of the lines? Silently sitting; contemplating, These ...

Good stuff :) Love this bit The first time, and the last, I said As I flicked the ashes off the end, After this, I'm through. The mixture of action ...