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Music is one of the most influential things on our planet (besides our peers, lol). So I’ve written one story with 4 parts: 1st part was written along with blues/jazz, ...

Ooh, anger... lol :) Love wasn't abolished. It was [s]bloody[/s] made in sheer fantasies of bloody unions. I don't like the two bloody s. Love wasn't reaped. It was bloody ...

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Banned for caring about the underscore :P

=) Deep. But true. This could turn into a debate if we aren't careful lol. But I like the simplicity of the sentences and how they bring so much out ...

Banned for convicting me haha

Hey =) I think there are too many that all, this all 's int the first stanza. You don't need that repitition. But otherwise, I love the way you described ...

Banned for the licking tiger avatar lol. Who knows where that's been? :)

Yay! Welcome to YWS :) And I understand about the 'not being able to finish' bit. Feel free to PM me anytime and if you have any other problems, go ...

Hi :) I've already welcomed you in your guestbook, So just a few things. We are asked to post 2 reviews before any of our own works. :) Keep it ...

I like this. If You look Hard enough; far enough, You might just happen to see the Blazing stars up ahead, Gleaming, shining, Surrounding You and me I think it ...

I don't really see a solid structure for this poem. And I agree with Maki-Chan about the 'jumping around' bit. Life has changed My world is different. I told you ...

Hey :) Well, PM me anytime you need to know something :) And welcome to YWS. It's not too hard here, lol. The only thing to watch is getting addicted ...

Hey :) To be honest, I don't think the title works. It's French, and long..and drawn out and I can't see anything relating it to the story other than the ...

Thanks guys :) I will work on it :)