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I have been with YWS for four years and this is what I see: YWS has become a popularity contest and a Hierarchy. The most original members are controlling not ...

Hmm thankyou for the insight. To turn a planet's spin wouldn't require that an object be "bigger" than it, or even relatively "big," at all--just that at the time of ...

mm, you have a point. Thanks :)

I am neither for evolution nor against it. It could be said I am still figuring it out. I have done some research and come upon something that logically and ...

This is a new style for me, so please critique. There is something missing and I am hoping someone will be able to show me. Commas were, for the main ...

Hey vine, As OverEasy said, look at doing some reviews. :) I'll give a quick review now. First off, very short. The parentheses are unnecessary. The whole thing about a ...

Hey, I was planning on critiquing this for you but it hurts my eyes too much. Why don't you change the font, then perhaps more people will review. If you ...

Hey sara, As you are new I'll just say that members are asked to post at least two reviews before their own to keep everything at a healthy ratio of ...

Hey Sc0rpiA93, This is a very overly-used theme. By any means it is not any less important, but to deliver it the writer must be able to use originality. And ...

Hey SkaterPunk2011, I felt left out as the reader in this. As the second stanza started I wondered who it was exactly you wanted that feeling of want to come ...

Thanks Vernon :)

Evening seas will roll with our coming toxicity, the red of blood swirling up onto our coasts. New kings will arise with profound powers - And we will marvel. Orbits ...

I am dramatically bored, put your hands on my forehead, it's heated under your fingertips. Hear the monotonous tones that mean to shape my life, can you see my disinterest? ...

Hey Ok. I'll give you an honest critique. Firstly, I enjoyed reading this. There was good imagery and the words had alot of meaning. Just a few things I picked ...

Hey... Not bad. But I truly think you shouldn't have the rhyme. It's such a strong poem and the words are so forceful that the rhyme seems to take that ...