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Re: Middle Scool "love"
Hello. :) I'm here to review your work today. Well [insert comma here] i I guess everyone very one that is in middle school would know about all the people ...
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Re: short excerpt from my story
Hey, I'm here to review your piece. :) I'll start with some grammar then move on to the story itself. This left her eyes suitably red and tear stained for ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: hello :)
Well, I like to write more realistic types of things, which is basically what I read. I guess I read about the same things I write about, if that makes ...
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Re: the keeper
Hey, interesting piece you have here. I'll go through some grammatical stuff for you, and then tell you what I think as a whole. Sound good? Great. :D It was ...
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: hello :)
Hi, my name is Robyn and I used to have an account here a long time ago, however I forgot the username and didn't go on much anyways. I think ...
Mar 5, 2010
