indigochild1991

Hello!! Although I love this as I have loved the others, I think you could describe the scene of the accident a lot more. In saying that, however, your use ...

Hello again!! Oooh I like it!! Great work again! One little thing (although I accept this could be completely personal) is that it would be great for Life to be ...

Hello! This is a brilliant, original idea. However, I think that in some parts you could be a bit more creative-I agree with what was said earlier about the generic ...

Hello!! I love your plot line-classic! You have quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes, but I can see that people have already pointed those out! Your characterisation is ...

This is such a pretty poem!!! It's lovely. I don't really know the greatest amount about poem structure and that, but I really did like your structure. Your use of ...

Hello!! Firstly, I just want to say that I love the idea here-it's really quite original, with there being so many Stephanie Meyer fan-fics. I love the character of Rosalie, ...

My first fan-fic! Hope you like it!! ************************************ Off he goes, after a kiss, a word of goodbye. Off he ventures into the deep forest, the wide world. I am ...

This is the first time I've ever reviwed poetry apart from at school! I didn't think I was hugely into them, but so many poems here are so lovely!! You ...

This seems to be a brilliant idea, which could be amazing. One of the main errors that I found is the language here and there. You say 'mom', but, as ...

My initial thoughts-well done! This is generally a brilliant piece of work. You have really captured Anthony Horowitz's writing style! It does have the feel of one of his novels-great ...

As I lie under the endless black night sky, with the millions of silvery stars staring down upon me, my breath coming out in rugged, small gasps, I think of ...

There is a brilliant idea behind this story, and really makes a statement about the reality of young civilians dying in war-go you! It really is a fantastic story-extremely fast ...

I thought that this was a brilliant story, for several reasons. I think you really captured Alice's character here, like when she is in a serious situation, but is still ...

I have only watched interview with the vampire and I'm in love with it already!!!! I want to read the book!!! Anyway... your characterisation is great, we are absorbed into ...

It is dark tonight. The sky stands over me, protectively, with a thousand stars like twinkling fairies smiling down upon me, watching over me. The air is sweet, the scent ...