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Profile: Name- Mahina Age- 17 Gender- Female Personality- She is a nature lover, even her name means 'the moon.' She's kind, loving and warm, but knows how to look out ...

Oooh, this sounds interesting! Name : Elena Osborne Age : 17 Gender : Female Grade : (would she be around 10th grade?) Sorry I'm not too sure! Appearance : She ...

Hey there! I personally think that your story needs more description of the characters-it helps the reader to imagine them as being real, and helps them to want to find ...

Hey!! Looks like you need another male character since there's only like three against five females!! Well, I'll help!! Name: Jonah Fletcher Age: 18 Description: He's got tanned skin with ...

Profile- Name: Emily Age: (13-25) 20 Gender: (try to keep it 3 and 3) Female Personality: She is sincere and oving to those close to her, but she is emotional, ...

Name: Meadow Rice Persona: She's a kind girl, but a bit of a drama queen. She loves art, and dresses in ethnic style clothes. She is friendly and enjoys meeting ...

Hello there!! I'll begin by saying that the fast-paced, action style that you have here is very engaging, and keeps the reader interested, but di try to make sure you ...

Hello!! Lobely to meet you1 You sound cool! What kind of things do you like to write? I look forward to seeing some of your work!!!

Hey there!! I'm relatively new here! Nice to meet you! My name is Hannah, and...hmm.....what to say? Oooh, homeschool? What is that like? Theatre geek? Yay!!! I'm doing Theatre Studies ...

I really love this poem. It's beautiful, emotional and simple. When I say simple, I mean in a good way. It is clear and beautifully comprehensible with lots of genuine ...

Name: Amandine Age: 19 Gender: Female Race: Vampire Clan: Echelon Apperance: About 5'4, Native American. Long black hair, olive skin Blood Thirst or Vegetarian: ((If vampire)) Vegetarian Other: She is

Hmm I liked it! I really did. It's one of those lovely stories that really dp brighten up your day a little! If this was a film I would more ...

I loved this! People say that I am too naieve about life, so it's good to know there are other out there who feel the way that I do!! All ...

Sometimes, it’s so quick. Sometimes, I have to be there in a flash, with no time to think about it. I have to go and collect them or they’ll get ...

Hello!! I like your idea, the origina but still sort of classic if that makes sense! The only things I would say on the negative side is that maybe you ...