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Wow, very intense. I love that. :) Thank you. (:

Hey Stephene, Which punctuation marks were you talking about? Thanks for the feedback, Ina

(note: a lot of the white space used in this poem did not show up when posted.) This is your category: Staking out campfires on the waiting, like bricks obscuring ...

I posted a poem and got reviews on it, however now that poem is going to be published in a literary journal and I want to delete it from the ...

I love so many bits and pieces of this poem, but overall it doesn't strike me as a particularly engaging piece. I really like the lines, my mind has shattered ...

nothing like integrating science and art! Hot Air by Amber Morrell 4/9/2010 If everything is temporary, I’m lying naked on my back but this fever still permeates my skin, sweating ...

This poem has some wonderful lines in it, and your use of simile is absolutely astounding. My favorite lines were: I try to speak but words I long to say ...

Thank you very much. :)

Like Bears By Amber Morrell Don’t go to Boston, it’s too cold there. The wooden roofs meet at a point a triangle above two metal grates aiming at white overcast ...

Hello! (: Other than the spelling error Mia has already pointed out, I found this poem to be incredibly well written. Something I would try to focus on is increasing ...

I loved this book. I picked it up at a thrift store without knowing anything about it and I was so glad I did, it's definitely one of my all ...

Depends on region and also ethnicity of the family. For me, I do not really have a set cultural background so we tend to eat a variety of things. Typically ...

Hello Ina! I'm June, and I'm your critic for now! I'm going to review this. This "wowed" me. I am completely impressed with your usage of words here. It's simple, ...

the tall buildings and paved roads are built atop repression. never once can we imagine what lies below this world. ignorant to what's before us, we look, but we don't ...

This was absolutely amazing. I think it really captures the feelings and confusion that come with having to make a difficult choice, especially when it comes to loved ones. I ...