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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Devil Has Dimples (Prologue + Chapter 1)

    My review is more about style and what I like about the way you write. I thought it is insteresting the way the story is carried. Watch for the commas, ...

    Nov 12, 2009


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