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Re: Struck Sightless-chapter one
I finally got to the first chapter, but I still haven't edited the prologue. I would recommend reading it to get a better understanding of this anyway though. Two years ...
Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:58 pm -
Re: ~The Black Masquerade~
We stealthy walk aroung the room, looking for signs of anything unusual. Finding nothing, we retire back out to the street. Only to see three more, very fancy people walking ...
Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:42 pm -
Re: Outcasts. DT
OK, here is our forum. Post any questions or ideas here. I would like the story to start out at the hideout, but some people can be out on missions. ...
Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:22 pm -
Re: Outcasts
Of course! Just fill out a profile! OK, before you write check out the Discussion forum...I will post the link below. Link :D :
Mon Aug 31, 2009 11:18 pm -
Re: London Rain
This was awesome! I thought about WWII before the last stanza too! You have great description here, but not too much. That's great, and it was easy to understand. I ...
Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:14 am -
Re: My notebook
*gold star*
Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:05 am -
Re: The Guardians
This is a good abstract idea, but you are just telling me everything, and not showing me. Like right here in the beginning: The lioness is my guardian I am ...
Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:44 am -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for not growing up.
Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:28 am -
Re: The User Below You ... [2]
Nope, I don't have a Facebook. :P TUBM Owns chickens
Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:27 am -
Re: Outcasts
Okay, I started this Storybook once before, and I think it will turn out really good this time. Anyone can join, even if you weren't in the last session. Old ...
Fri Aug 28, 2009 1:21 am -
Re: And We Were
This poem was great June! I had to read it a few times to understand it completely though. Great word choice, but be careful on how many descriptive words that ...
Tue Aug 11, 2009 7:06 pm -
Re: Beach Photos!
I love the bird in number nine :)
Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:28 am -
Re: Jump
The poem was great, I liked how you couldn't see the end. Young, I think the poem about the basket ball is by Anti-Pop. Here is the whole poem showing ...
Sat Jul 11, 2009 8:34 pm -
Re: Hello. Greetings
Hiya LyrasPan, I love your user name! I am guessing that you have read The Golden Compass. Have you read the rest of the series?What book is your favourite? How ...
Sat Jul 11, 2009 6:46 pm -
Re: Blind - Chapter 23 part 2
This was great, but it was a little hard for me to tell whose POV it was. I didn't really get that it was Ashleigh until she started talking, and ...
Sat Jul 11, 2009 6:11 pm
