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Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
This is the newest story that I am writing~ Thanks! ~Poem
Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:02 am -
Re: Road Narrows
Title is subject to change. [EDIT: Title was changed from "Noah's Story" to "Road Narrows"] What I have below includes the prologue and some of what I have written. Tell ...
Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:55 am -
Re: Biodiversity paper
I have to write a biodiversity paper on Kauai. That is all of the instructions that I received from my teacher, and I am not sure what I should do. ...
Sat Nov 14, 2009 11:06 pm -
Re: We All Go Marching One by One
I love this! I thought it was great, and I knew that is was about the Holocaust by the end. I can't say much more. Keep up the great work! ...
Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:15 am -
Re: Last Breath Reminiscence
I really liked this! I don't have much else to say, but you could break it into stanzas. ~Poem
Wed Oct 28, 2009 3:39 am -
Re: She still waits
I really liked this poem. I thought that it flowed fairly well and the rhyme fit well too. Well done, ~Poem
Mon Oct 26, 2009 5:09 am -
Re: Obama Applauds YWS in Community Service Speech
You guys are so mean. :P April even got me going at school. I was so excited. That is probably why she didn't want to tell our teacher about it. ...
Wed Sep 30, 2009 2:40 am -
Re: A story I wrote for L.A.
To say something for Rocky here, the project was to describe a postcard without a plot. :P Anyway, I like how you had it in second person. It's unusual, but ...
Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:54 am -
Re: Resounding Beauty
This is a homework assignment. We had to write a descriptive writing piece without a plot about a postcard that we were given. Here's mine, it is due tomorrow. Thanks. ...
Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:03 pm -
Re: Outcasts
I think that we are at the Safe House now and everyone is starting to relax more. Bring yourselves into the story and socialize with people...i will post later, but ...
Wed Sep 09, 2009 1:43 am -
Re: Outcasts. DT
Name: Chase Gender: Male Age: 15 Special ability: Can run at the speed of sound, and if he concentrates really hard he can walk through walls, but he has to ...
Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:47 pm -
Re: Outcasts
Robin~ I turn back over to Zach and Sandy while the others walk back to everyone else. "Zach, I do care, but Sandy needs some rest too. Look at how ...
Sun Sep 06, 2009 8:30 pm -
Re: The Orphan
To me, it seemed that you were trying to get through the story as quick as possible. It would make no sense that a five year old would know to ...
Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:27 pm -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
BAnned for having numbers in myour username!
Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:59 pm -
Re: Outcasts
Robin~aerial fight When I am about 50 meters up in the air I remember something. The tracking device. I double my weight and shoot down out of the sky. Only ...
Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:44 pm
