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Re: Breaking Dawn Parody
*dies laughing* This made my day
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
YWS is awesome. No one can deny it. YWS gave me another reason to write more, and helped me improve my writing. Again, YWS is awesome! :D (Will write more ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Breena (Twelve)
Hey, sorry that this isn't much of a review. I loved this! I was at the edge of my seat muttering, "Don't go with him! Don't go with him!" xD ...
Dec 4, 2009 -
Re: And so they fade...
And then they are born These small moments in which We ignore the value of These cherished laughs That we have shared Over our deepest secrets And hidden thoughts Will ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Sachiko's Photo Emporium-- Photos added 3/7/10
THese are awesome! What camera do you use?
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Breena (Ten)
These are awesome! I have been following them since you started. :) Great job! Poem
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Here's the second part to Road Narrows, Thanks :D ~Poem
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: Road Narrows (2)
Here's the next part..I hope to have the third part up by the end of next week...or sooner. :D Tell me what you think, ~Poem “Who was that?” She calls ...
Nov 21, 2009 -
Re: Outcasts
Should we start this up again?
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: The Joker
That's awesome! You are one of those lucky people who can draw! It does seem like the head should be tilted a bit. I don't know... Anyway...I think that this ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: xLogan's xTravagant Reviews!
Here's my story! I want to know how well developed my characters are Is the scenario realistic? And... Does it make you want to read more Anything else that you ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Away from the world
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I liked this piece! It flowed well for me. I would just try and break it into stanzas. That makes it a little easier to ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Brother, My Brother, Tell Me, What Are We Fighting For?
Poem here to review! This was rather choppy, you could try to blend some of the sentences together more. Or have the sentences vary in length a bit more. Also ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: no athiests in foxholes
I really likes the poem until here: in the first sweet sleepy moments of the morning when you're wakened by the sun's caress and aware of everything and nothing or ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
Can you review this if you have time? Thanks! ~Poem
Nov 15, 2009
