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Re: Dream Catcher
Sicily~ I took the strange girl behind the presentation hoping that no one would see, but our commander glanced our way at just the wrong moment. "Sicily who is that? ...
Thu Mar 12, 2009 1:07 am -
Re: The Outcasts
*how about now* Robin~ I was scanning the ground below me when i saw a lone figure standing next to a tree looking confused; I swerved down. Evan was asking ...
Thu Mar 12, 2009 12:59 am -
Re: The Outcasts
Robin~ "Ohh, is that food i smell?" Robin dashed to get a plate from the cupboard then piled brinner onto it. As she was doing so she introduced Evan. The ...
Wed Mar 11, 2009 12:25 am -
Re: Dream Catcher
Sicily Romano~ I silently followed everyone else in Rave into our headquarters with my shoulders hunched. Hoping not to be noticed i waited until everyone else had entered before i ...
Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:37 am -
Re: The Outcasts
Robin- " No i am fine, I have my own way of travel." Robin looked Evan up and down; trying to find something threatening in his posture. Finding none, she ...
Mon Mar 09, 2009 4:27 am -
Re: The Outcasts
Robin swooped down into the large trees; she saw a boy standing alone in the forest looking scarred. She was about to call to him, but as she did a ...
Sun Mar 08, 2009 11:04 pm -
Re: The Outcasts
Forget everything i said here Ummm... I have just a few things to say. 1. I think that we should start over completely, so forget everything that has happened before, ...
Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:33 pm -
Re: The Outcasts
What is happening: Robin is flying over the forest looking for other outcasts. The wind blows past my face tugging at my soul
Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:49 am -
Re: The Outcasts
Sorrry about what i said. we arre going to write as we were, but grammer is very important!
Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:40 am -
Re: The Outcasts
Ok! This is perfect! We will start now! I just have a couple thingd to say first. 1. Please no more escapee's i wanted there to be less than other ...
Sat Mar 07, 2009 5:50 pm -
Re: Dream Catcher
Name: Sicilly Romano Age: 14 Academy: Rave Position: Navigator Abilities/Strengths: Spirit Manipulation; can make people think what she wants them to. Weaknesses: Loud noises, and pain. Appearance: Bl
Sat Mar 07, 2009 4:25 am -
Re: The Outcasts
Plot: You are an outcast. There has always been something different about you, (your power). Soon people from the government came and tried to capture you, so you ran away ...
Sat Mar 07, 2009 2:52 am -
Re: Just A Memory
i only have one question who died? PM me please and answer my question i loved it though
Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:29 am -
Re: Pangaea
i know this review is short ,but i loved it! I like the way you put it.
Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:52 am -
Re: Poem
for me the poem has plenty of imagery, and almost every poem has a simile\metaphor in it, so i would leave it as it is. For a title you might ...
Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:15 am
