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i reviewed all of those; keep them coming! :D

It was good. :wink: i only found a few errors. The smells would swirl, swirl together you repeat swirl here and it sounds weird. But sometimes I wouldn’t get up ...

in the beginning what are all of the stars for they seem out of place? Overall i liked it;i didn't find any grammatical errors at all. It was a little ...

thank you

people can start adding characters whenever they want, but only two characters per person. :lol:

Thanks for all of the reviews, just to say; Shaleer is a girl. I didn't even know that i used the word screech so much, but that is the sound ...

I really liked it, but the feet on the guy look like they are at the wrong angle. :D

i have never read anything like it, and i could almost hear the music in my head! Very origional!

i found it with it's podcast on itunes

i think that arguing is fine especially if it is not with someone you care about. An argument can drive people farther apart, and eventually lead to more arguments.

here i know you have already read it but i still need a review

please review i am sorry that it is out of the middle of my novel Dae's Vans is the companion to it by peanutgallery007

Will do

this is the companion to peanutgallery007's Daemeons Van's we are writing a book together and this is my version in my characters perspective. Under The Circumstances The distant thrum of ...

hey i liked it! For everyone else that read it and liked it peanutgallery007 are writing a book together, and here is my characters perspective of the event.