imapoemperson

the title says all. Help.

I am really not sure about this peice, and i'd appreciate a review. :) thanks!

Hello Welcome to YWS! Do you mind if i call you PG for short? I had no idea you made an account, that is awesome! Anyway, for anyone who is ...

It was good, but it got a little confusing. Was the point of veiw in the pups? You might want to clarify a bit. Without punctuation the poem looks more ...

Hi i am poem; now here is your review. I liked it, but it was a bit long, and seemed to drag out. In the first stanza it took me ...

What book was your favorite? Did you like the movie? Im imapoemperson, but you can call me poem. I hope you enjoy YWS; i love it! The only time i ...

Almost everyone i know knows that i write, but i hate it when adults put on that fake smile, and act like they think i can never get published.

i liked it, i have never read sarcasm in a poem before!

c'mon write please. i will tomorrow, but it is really late tonight.

Down for a week! I think i will die!

Title: Struck Sightless Aisle: 2 Style of Review: Basic Link: Word Count: short thank you! Expect a frequent customer!

please review!

pronunciation guide: Girl=Tuli= Toolie Boy=Seacus= See cus Struck Sightless “How” Tuli innocently asks. She of all people has to be the one to ask the question that I have been ...

Shell

you can start i will post my oppinion in a bit.