imapoemperson

I think it is perfect, but if you could make a set of word poems, and eventually write a paragraph. :lol: That would be awesome.

I liked it, but it seems like you repeat 'make me' a lot. :D Not much else to say. :? Oh, and you don't need to say 'no offense' because ...

Again you didnt rhyme; good for you! :D it seems like you might have repeated 'my thoughts' too mant times; it disrupts the flow. Otherwise i really liked it. Oh.. ...

see you didn't even rhyme! I thought it was good, but since i know the person who you were fighting with...i can say that the poem hits a little close ...

I like the edges to the flower petals. :D sorry for the lame review :lol:

i likee the lighting.:)

Hello, i am imapoemperson, but since that is long and tedious to write you can call me poem. I am the one writing the book with peanut, and i have ...

Sometimes it helps other times it makes writing harder, but you will only find an original book to read if the author who wrote it never read a book in ...

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this was good Blind by meep:)

are you still going to do mine?

a lullaby that a mother in my book sings to her childern when she has to give them up. Oh, and i know how terrible it is. Precious blackbird Sleep ...

i really need some help with this peice id appreciate your help!

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I loved it! It sounded more like thoughts than words, if you know what i mean. There is not anything else i can say about it. Great job! :D