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Name: Amaranth (Ama or anything but Amy) Age: 16 Gender: Female Parent: Hestia Personality: is kind and patient. She is not afraid to speak her opinion, but she is very ...

I'm going to keep Andrew. :) Name: Andrew Mays Nickname: Andy Age: 17 District: Eight Appearance: Longish brown hair, and a warming smile. Andrew can blend into almost any crowd, ...

We had to write another chapter of The Giver by Louis Lowry in my English class. The first sentence is actually the last sentence of the book. But perhaps it ...

Hey there, I really Like this. It flows well, and drew me in. It's up to you if you want to continue it. It could work well as a short ...

I really liked the description that you had here, and the rhythm worked really well. Your title drew me in, great job! I’m sure that I’ll adapt. Is the only ...

Wow. I loved this piece. You description was beautiful, and the situation was highly realistic. The whole peice flowed together well. I felt like I was there in the room ...

Hey there, Is this the end of your story? Personally, I think that this would be an awesome ending, but there are a lot of things that you could do ...

RSVP If I remember. :)

THis is a lot like a story that I am writing currently. :) I think that you should keep going with it. It will be hard not to have much ...

I thought that this was wonderful. I liked how you started and ended all of the stanzas with the same line. That made the last stanza stand out, so great ...

Wow. I really liked this. I felt like you let the reader get to know the characters. Plus the end had some great imagery. The idea of a blackened sun ...

I really enjoyed this! I thought that it was written well, but have you thought of splitting it up into different stanzas? It might make it flow easier. I think ...

Voted. :)

Uh, just to let you know, their mother, Rhea, didn't choose who ruled. Zeus just ruled, because he was the one to kill Kronos, their father. Also, their powers aren't ...

This is really good! That extra line on the nose is bugging me though, would it be better without it? Anyway, great job! Poem