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Re: Poem's poems
Dont even try to understand it, i know how awful it is. Stumps in a lake, I run my fingers, Along the sand, Of this long forgotten land. The water ...
Fri Apr 10, 2009 4:26 am -
Re: Poem's poems
Peter~ To tame a piano 1 and 2 and 3 and 4 and, a steady chant, an interminable rant. A B C D E F G, My fingers fly, Up ...
Thu Apr 09, 2009 5:15 am -
Re: Stormy Reviews~
Title: Verboten a tribute to Helmuth Hubener Genre: Narrative poetry Link: Thank you! The poem might seem a bit long, but I think it goes by fast.
Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:07 pm -
Re: Evi's Evaluation Emporium!
I really need some reviews on this...thanks! :D
Wed Apr 08, 2009 11:04 pm -
Re: Verboten ~ a tribute to Helmuth Hübener
verboten=forbidden You marched our soldiers, Out to war. And my brother Followed suit Back he came, Verboten items In arms. A radio stood Amongst the mix, That shone Like bright ...
Wed Apr 08, 2009 4:09 am -
Re: Poem's poems
forgot to post the poem for yesterday so here are both p.s. i know they are awful Kite Don’t put all of your weight onto the torn kite-string. Loosen your ...
Tue Apr 07, 2009 11:59 pm -
Re: The Outcasts
Whole new thread, we should have somepne lock this one.
Tue Apr 07, 2009 11:20 pm -
Re: Poem's poems
computer wouldn't let me post it yesterday :x My tongue, As sharp as a snakes, Lets loose, Words, Not meant to, Break. Words, Strewn bitter, With haste.
Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:39 pm -
Re: The Outcasts
I say we start over.
Mon Apr 06, 2009 11:21 pm -
Re: Strike
About a girl in my book who controls weather. ( A five minute poem) Lightning flourishes across the sky, I ignore the accusing eyes, Asking why. They want to know, ...
Sun Apr 05, 2009 5:57 am -
Re: Poem's poems
Sing and dance, Sing and dance, All across the room, We can even tidy up, If you bring a broom. Laugh and play, Laugh and play, You go have some ...
Sun Apr 05, 2009 5:47 am -
Re: Do You Get It?
I get it! :idea:
Sat Apr 04, 2009 11:50 pm -
Re: Poem's poems
please excuse the awfulness of my poem, but i was falling asleep in my seat. So tired Eyes close As I drift Off to sleep, I wonder of the dreams ...
Sat Apr 04, 2009 4:20 am -
Re: Poem's poems
I swear that i wrote it... i just forgot to post it. Words flitter Through my ears Some bitter, Sharp as shears. Others kind, That follow me Throughout my Years.
Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:03 am -
Re: The Neverending Love Song
When i clicked on the link i was dreading some cheesy love song. I couldn't have been more wrong! Your rhyming was perfect, never too repetitive. Your rhythm was on ...
Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:15 pm
