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Re: A Drawing of a Crying Girl
I cannot believe that you are only fourteen!
Sat May 09, 2009 5:24 am -
Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
I's are capitalized, because they are a proper noun.
Sat May 09, 2009 5:15 am -
Re: ~The Inevitable Thought~
Great poem! I just have a few things to say. :arrow: But then come this thought: Comes would work better...I think. :arrow: Though we all know about it, To me ...
Sat May 09, 2009 5:01 am -
Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
I really loved this poem! I couldn't find that much wrong with it. Although, there are some I's that need to be capitalized. Other than that I cannot find anything. ...
Sat May 09, 2009 4:42 am -
Re: Yes, I get to announce that I'm new!
Hiya there, I'm Poem! It is a good thing that you chase a short user name, because mine is super long to write whenever I introduce myself. What is your ...
Thu May 07, 2009 3:44 am -
Re: ~The Black Masquerade~
*sorry; I was at someones house this weekend, and I couldn't post.* Lilly~ We walk back into the room. " I think we should do a quick glance over of ...
Tue May 05, 2009 11:29 pm -
Re: my arm
Great poem! Although, I would add some punctuation, and capitalize the first letter in each line.
Fri May 01, 2009 5:11 pm -
Re: Black Masquerade DT
Is it ok that I didn't add Lilly at the ball? She isn't really that high in the social class anyway.
Thu Apr 30, 2009 4:26 am -
Re: ~The Black Masquerade~
"Avelle, Madeline...you are?" I hear the man call from behind me. Perfect, I hope they know something about the dead boy. I turn around to see the newcomers dressed in ...
Thu Apr 30, 2009 4:25 am -
Re: Faith
I wrote this a while ago, but I kept forgetting to post it. Faith Faith builds strong homes, Strong families, strong friends. When a souls last song is sung, Faith ...
Thu Apr 30, 2009 4:05 am -
Re: Too Long Hidden
Hiya! Poem at your service, how can I help you today. A review...that is simple enough, will this suffice? You know not what you are to me, Not a friend ...
Thu Apr 30, 2009 1:59 am -
Re: Harriet
Oh, Harriet Why did you go? Why did you have to, Leave us so? You were my favorite, I loved you the best, The one who stood out, Among the ...
Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:56 pm -
Re: Black Masquerade DT
Where should I come in? I got a little bit behind.
Mon Apr 27, 2009 11:08 pm -
Re: ~The Black Masquerade~
I walk over to the two in the corner, Maddie and Tristan if I heard correctly. "Sorry, but I seemed to overhear you recent conversation."Their faces pale." Don't worry, I ...
Mon Apr 27, 2009 5:39 am -
Re: ~The Black Masquerade~
* Can someone bring me in please?*
Sat Apr 25, 2009 5:15 am
