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Wow, I really liked this! It was a lot darker than most of your work, but it felt more personal and deep. It gave me shivers at the end. It ...

Do you still need a character who steals things?

Hey there :) I really liked this poem. It's simple tone fits it perfectly, and I like how it feels almost like a letter. There was only one small error ...

i'm not afraid of frogskin- my childhood hands clasped more cold, sticky-toed frogs than my adolescent fingers brushed the minds of boys. i would listen for hours hoping the wind ...

I really liked the beginning of this poem, but I think that it faded a bit at the end. The first line really drew me in, and I wanted to ...

Hey there, I really liked this poem. I think that it's my favorite of yours so far, at least out of the ones that I've seen. It flowed really nicely, ...

Hey there :) I liked this, and I think that you should continue it. The storyline seems origional and interesting. There are just a few things that you could work ...

Hooray for Indie Rock! xD

Hey there, Poem here. Okay, I just read the whole thing, and it's a little bit like a huge info dump. Obviously, these are all interesting people and they all ...

This is an essay I did for school. I know it needs a lot of work. I appreciate all reviews. :) Auschwitz: Work Makes You Free In 1940, the small ...

Lets see if I can get farther than last year!XD Critiques are much appreciated. April 1st, Untitled Silence fills the empty cracks of lives lived in solitude. Hidden under rocks ...

Hey there, I'm Poem. Welcome to YWS! :) I liked this poem, but it was rather short. Maybe you could try adding some length to it, perhaps an example of ...

I just realized that I don't have villain. 0.o

Hello, I liked this! I have to say that my first line is my favourite, (The first line that was written by you). The only thing that struck me as ...

Hey, I think Dara and Ama could be good friends if you want. Ama, Daughter of Hestia~ I look up from my book, and listen to the quiet noises of ...