imaginemymind

Ok so to be honest im not to used to giving reviews but here it goes..... well i found the topic of the story really interesting and attention grabbing. i ...

Wow . this is good. much better than your first chapter. still can use some tweaking but really good. your improving.. keep it up :] -imaginemymind.!

"Stina get up! It happened again, they attacked!” I said shaking my best friend awake. “Stina!!” “You have got to be kidding me! Just go without me!” “Naxos said he ...

Author note: O.K so I know the prologue is a little iffy, but that kinda why i put it on here. Give me your opinions people. Bring it on :] ...

this is very interesting . its good, but sort of rushed. you need to slow it down and work on your details. it would make the story more intriguing and ...

"Boy, pull up your pants." Mrs.Williams called to me as i walked out of my apartment building. I ignored her like i hadn't heard anything, even though i knew later ...

Whoa i really really like this. its descriptive but you can sort of sense the emotions basically in the air, around him. and i totally totally loved the whole thing ...