imaginemymind

I COMPLETELY agree that the last two lines do not belong... Thanks for the review. I apreciate it and I also like it when poems have like a dark feel ...

Well I guess in a way you can say she is .. not literally. This is more about a dying friendship than anything else. The narrator feels that Mary Ann ...

O.K ...I'm going to be honest ..I'm not that great at reviewing.. Butt anywho ... I absolutely LOVE (no pun intended) this piece . I found it to flow very ...

Wow ... wasn't expecting someone to review the piece so quickly.. THANKSSS!! :) ... I really aprreciate your comments Your AWESOME -XOXO imaginemymind

They have stolen you from me, Taken away my happiness. Now everything I see Is pure dullness. My heart lacks that extra beat, My stomache the butterflies. All I can ...

Hello Mary Ann? Hello Mary Ann are you with me? I didn't think so... Mary Ann I need to tell you something, I need to tell you that you'll always ...

O.K .. one word! amazing! ...i really like this. And for someone who doesn't have alot of experience writing your doing a fantastic job!!! seriously.! i love your use of ...

Very nice .... I'm impressed to say the least. I did find your structure very interesting. I could definitely see someone reading this aloud to me with powerful emotions in ...

Beautiful poem. Its very nice and i find it is written some what well. Just one thing, though , i find its kind of hard to read. It could just ...

OHHHHHH MYYYYY!!!! :) HAYLEY!WILLIAMS! I'm a HUGE! fan of PARAMORE .... BEST BAND EVER!!!(well in my opinion) Very nice graphics in the pic .... lol you did her justice :) ...

WHOA!!! Totally loved! that. It's very deep. Definitely MY KIND OF POETRY :). Just one thing ... even though it's poetry, it still needs punctuation. It helps the reader know ...

I think this is a perfect description of Adolf Hitler. In my english class right now we're reading Anne Frank and about the Holocaust, so this defintiely describes the man ...

When the lights go out And I'm stranded alone I'll think of you to comfort my fear And drive away my anxiety. My hands will search for you So you ...

Long live our beautiful friendships With their laughs and miseries. The pains we now treasure Will forever be living. Remember the times we laughed, The times cried, And the times ...

Really good chapter .. I was really suprised when jeremy spoke .. lol even though it was a little . Keep on writing . (Sorry for the very very very ...