imaginemymind

Hey Alwaysbeininspired95, I'm just going to tell you my general critique on both your chapters.I'll leave the nitpicks for later. Chapter 4: I really liked this because it gives you ...

Hey ultraviolet, I really enjoyed reading your short story. It captured the feelings of sorrow and pain the girl was having because of her sister's death. I liked how you ...

Hey PinkShearwater , Here to review. I've been following your story ever since i read the first chapter (obviously) because i find it to be great! Well i'm not that ...

Auhthor's Note: Hey everyone. I edited this piece and I believe I got everything people pointed out to me. I hope you like it. Please tell me if i still ...

Author's Note: This chapter is in the point of view of alot of people. I tried my best to make it very clear when they changed. Hope you guys enjoy ...

Hey Ultra .!, Imaginemymind here to see if you can review my piece ! I would really appreciate it. thanks in advance

I'm planning on writing a short story where one of the characters is addicted to drugs. And I definitely need help, I don't know much about drugs. I would appreciate ...

I actually lovvee to listen to music when I'm writing, whether its a novel or I'm doing homework It really gets my juices flowing. I listen to rock , mostly ...

Well , on the east coast, specifically in massachusetts we say : Salted- pretty much is wen you get disssed - as in you get insulted someone will say " ...

Hey Retrodisco666, Here to review.! My corrections shall be in red.! The things I like in blue :]Hope you take the time to read it all :] Everyone will fall ...

Hello ThatBoy.!, I Am Here To Review Even though there isn't much. I Really liked how you described the scene that was happening in the poem, but you could have ...

I promised her that I’d meet her here, her favorite park down the street from the public library. But it’s been four years. I had moved away because my father ...

Derek could feel himself getting stronger as his mouth filled with the delicious taste of blood from the weak teenage girl he had led to the alley behind a night ...

To be honest this didn't confuse me at all. I found it to be well- written and i felt like i kind of could relate to it. But I'm not ...

OMG.! Dude this is kinda eerie ... I Love it.! Its really well written just some little details that i shall point out in ..uhmm RED?And CAPITALS..!? Their THERE is ...