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1. I'd definitely suggest ANYTHING by Jodi Picoult. Right now I'm reading A Change of Heart, and it's absolutley GREAT! 2. Firefly Lane by Kristin Hannah, 3. Memoirs of a ...

Hey wickedwonder here to review , Mihaela ran through the large apartment, trying to find anything It's not really just anything , but the antidotes. . Nate stared at Charlotte’s ...

Author's Note: I had to write a scary story for my English class and this is what I came up with. Actually this is better because it couldn't be more ...

Hey storiesandsuch here for a quick review ! Let's just get the technical blah out the way (: 1.) You should split this into stanzas. 2.)The rhyming seemed forced. & ...

Hey IainMorrison here to review your piece, Looking down I reached for it but then stopped. I chose not to answer its request for my action. Answer or ignore. You ...

Hey RedRaven here to review !, Okay so I have been following your story & the last couple of chapters have been somewhat of a disappointment. They seem so scattered, ...

Hey Wickedwonder here to review, It wasn’t just the pain Charlotte Tucker felt, it was the hallucinations. Sometimes, she’d envision she was home, sitting in front of the fire on ...

Hey, Here to review! Unlike normal families that pass down jewelry, books, money, etc. There shouldn't be a period there. A comma would have worked. BUT I suggest you think ...

Overall I enjoyed this. At the beginning I wasn't all that interested. Your first sentence didn't really pull me in as much as it should have in my opinion. But ...

Heeeelloo PinkShearwater, :) Here to review . I HOPE YOU READ EVERYTHING!! :) Let's just get the nitpicks over with : I was afraid of bumping into Luke and afraid ...

Hey Persophoneia, Let me get this out of the way and say I only found one nitpick : Remember, when the streets proved too dark for out tastes I'm almost ...

Hey there, Maegardens. Well I agree that this poem needs some improving, like most poems do. I agree with Persephonia, this is more of a rant. You need to add ...

My parents start to talk about Luke at the dinner table and before I know it I start to hum. I place my hands over my ears and hum to ...

You have seen my pain and sorrow, Heard my hurt-filled cries. Without a second thought my routine I will follow And treasure the moment like the ultimate high. All the ...

Hey TheEnigma, I Only found one nitpick which is: The grey hoodie, one of from Jack's collection of college jumpers, fell around my thighs, my striped pyjama Pajamas is the ...