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Re: Take A Chance- 9
Heyy ! Here to review :) I didn’t have the chance to talk to Rose again, no comma during the afternoon. I wanted to know why she felt so strongly ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: First time photography
These were all taken at the city's public library. I hope you guys like them :) . Please give me your advise on how I can improve or even just ...
Jan 31, 2011 -
Re: City Lights Come Crashing Down
The city lights come crashing down As I walk the streets with my heart on my sleeve. It's November. Rotten leaves swept away by chilly winds. I'm left alone to ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Superglue - chapter 1
Hey Ofir , This isn't a total review I know but I just had to tell you I loved this ! The topic of cutting is really hard to express,but ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1 [Marco]
Hello AnneMarie96 ! Here to review! :) Secret love my escape take me far, far away, secret love are you there will you answer me prayer, please take me anywhere ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 7 (part one)
Hey theotherone ! I'm here to review. And just to let you know I've been dying until you posted another chapter of this novel so when I saw it I ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: On The Road (Chapter 1)
Hey DylanRay , Here to review ! My correction will be in purple The Birds are flying freely in the Sky This sentence got my attention. But only because I ...
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Why?
Hello Colie, Here for a quick review! Impression: The poem flowed quite well. It was about a topic that many can relate to and you did a good job executing ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Remember She Once was Innocent
She used to wear yellows and pinks, Now she's walking the streets in grays and blacks. Her life has no meaning. She will never forget it. She wore a smile ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
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Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: A Warm Break in Martha’s Vineyard -Chapter 1
Author's Note: Hello everyone. I hope you enjoy this first chapter of my new novel. I know I enjoyed writing it. Please give me your expertise (: The novel has ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Young Plymouth based Film maker
Hey James welcome to YWS. You'll love it here. This definitely is the best to come for inspiration for anything really and to show your work to other people. Can't ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby here to review (:, I must say I really liked this. The slang & spelling errors give it voice, they make it feel real. It has so much ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Let's Dance Upon God's Great Night
Author's Note: Hello everyone. Here's my latest poem. I hope you enjoy it. I know it needs some help. Please give me your expertise (: ( I'm a little iffy ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Personally, I really found Tuesdays with Morrie BORING! I began to read it because 1.) it was on this list my english teacher gave the class and 2.) my friend ...
Oct 7, 2010
