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Heather would probably go sight seeing ! What would your character do if they found themselves trapped in a car in the middle of a lake for instance ?

I take the envelope with shaking hands. My stomach begins to twist and turn and I can feel sweat collecting at the back of my neck. To Heather, from Luke. ...

Author's Note: This isn't the most eventful chapter but it has important things in it. Also the parts at the beginning about her mother and the boyfriend are important to ...

Hello :) Let's review shall we? As you noticed there is no blue in this review. There's a reason for that I swear :) I wanted to get straight to ...

It’s been an entire month since Jamie and I decided to call things off and I am still semi-depressed about the whole thing. We weren’t going out for long and ...

I'm not a big fan of science - fiction but this was good. I like this alot actually. There wasn't anything the needed correcting since it was a small piece. ...

Hey here to review ! :) First I think you can make this into a poem.You just have to put it in stanzas and such Today I walk away and ...

Author's Note: Hey gys this is the first chapter of my newest novel. It's a bit rough. I'm not to sure if I'm going to continue it, but I wanted ...

This was a very cute poem. I really like the metaphor you used. It kept me wanting to read. I wanted to know if he hit the slope or if ...

Hey Amiemalamie, here to review like I promised :) It was sort of peculiar looking at myself lay so still and quiet on the metal, white-sheeted bed. I liked that ...

Hey Theotherone, here to review!! (: Let me start off my saying I love this novel Now nitpicks : When we got to our friends, they were ready to go ...

I honestly only want to recommend one name. As I was reading your description of your character it just popped into my head. Adrianna ( or Adriana) it means dark ...

It is not restircited. Fantasy is endless, in the way that you can express your inner mind's creatures or the world that you would love to live in (: . ...

I recommend splitting the novel into parts. Start the first sectioin of the novel with the portagonist and as the story advances you can introduce the characters in other sections. ...

Okay so I need some information on what kind of injuries you can get after falling from a cliff. They have to be fatal, but at the same time you ...