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short sweet and very charming. nothing more to say excapt was the heck is a pricker? Georgie x

I don't really think that there's anything wrong with this. It's very cute, very romantic. Keep it up :)

Kieran held Charlotte delicately in his strong arms, his heart beating as hard as hers as they kissed. Six years and they had gone with only a few minor fights ...

It's very magical. It was like I was there, watching her. I like your use of words to describe the black mass as if it was living.

It's not bad, but there are some spelling errors. I like the way you narrated it, as if it was happening right now. I love how you described the moon ...

It was very clear but really sad. It is an emotional piece which brings out the cruel side of love: heartbreak. Keep writing! Georgie x

It's very sweet and a little teary. I love that Logan really cares about Abbey and vice versa. You have a talent for writing. Also, I love that you added ...

In general, it was quite a charming story. I liked that Marie usally won bets, but she didn't win this one and also that the dragon was quite calm, but ...

This was amazing! You should make this into a novel or something. I think that you could make it as a famous writer and I also think that you have ...

W.O.W It was very emotional and with great description. I liked that there was no happy ending which makes it a lot better for the reader who expects the main ...

I love it. it's short, sweet and a little sad

sort of reminds me on myself when I was in love with this guy in my tutor a few months back... hmmm..... its really god though kep it up =]

short, sweet and very well written. I love how Tristan just burst out with a description of her eyes and dimples, I found it quite amusing. Keep up the good ...

i dont really see anything wrong with it i think it's very good and you obviously have a natural talent for it Georgie x

It's gone so quick It feels like a day That I first walked through those doors Time seems to run away Year seven's over First year is gone Second year ...