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SOunds like a poem crossed with a story (Like my "I Love You" submission). It was sweet, sad, and a very unique writing style that captures the imagination. :) Georgie ...

I love the food reference (food lover over here ;) ) anyway, I thought it was short and sweet and to the point, something nice about heartbreak for once. :)

This was really cute :) I thought that it was also very emotional is a strange way :)

Burst of feelings XD Sorry.. This is really good! Description was good, vocabulary was amazing and it seemed really emotional :) Georgie x

This made me cry a little bit! It is so touching and emotional and it was just so amazing! Your talent is raw and natural. Keep writing! Georgie x

YOUR ARE SO FREAKIN AWESOME! this caught my eye with just the title, and I just had to read it about ten times. You have a very unique way of ...

In the starlight, nothing we do is convenient In the sun light, everything we do is seen In the shadows, no one cares, but us But in my heart, you ...

I’m walking through life, not quite dead, not quiet alive I can’t feel my soul, and I can’t feel my heart, if I can’t live without you, then why are ...

well, It was a compelling story line. It got a little boring near the end and yes, there were some spelling errors. I'm just not going to point them out. ...

I loved it. It was really cute and the protaganist really seemed to love Scarlett. What exactly happened to him to kill him? Just out of interest.... :)

I thought that this was so beautiful and sweet

I thought that it was very emotional and in some cases, funny. I could relate to that (THANKS A LOT. JOE!!) which made it easy to read and understand. I ...

It's really sweet that you said that he broke his own heart, and the other dude didn't. It was a little too depressing, to be honest, but it was good ...

As a bisexual, I thought that you captured the lesbian scene perfectly. I love that Sarah was a lesbian who was marrying a homophobe who didnt except his daugters sexuality. ...

It was very cute, kind of sad and just really good. It expressed what a little child would think when they were young and how they still felt as they ...