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Re: Louis
The pain is an empty, soulless cavern My heart is a shattered crystal Each shard will penetrate you And make you hurt more than You made me ache from the ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: The Field
I cried when I read this. Very emotional, very powerful. It's such a sad ending, too. But, just separating it into paragraph, no divided sections would be better and easier ...
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Another Chance
This was powerful, creepy and brilliant. Ten minutes later, I lugged my suitcases out into the hall. I paused for a second and looked around. This had been my home ...
Aug 11, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not The Hero
I'm not the one who wears a cape Or saves people I'm not the one who has big muscles Or charming good looks I'm not the one who wants revenge ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: One More Day
If I could be with you for just one more day I would say I love you, and I would hold you I would stare into your eyes, your green, ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Luperca
Hey! I liked this, it was a great read! I didn't realize she was a wolf until you said something about her fur. But it was nice all the same. ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Honey Sweet
Hi! Thsi piece was very touching and I loved it His laugh was like long forgotten bubbles safely secured under a rock in a fish bowl. This was by far ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Coffee Elves
Ok. Guy with platinum blonde hair, green eyes and glasses? Check Girl who thinks she's falling for him? Check Heart break? Check Coffee elves? Check Well, everything seems to be ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: The End
I liked this :) It was good to read but if you made it a bit longer that would have been awesome Also, that guy's fail made me LOL my ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Down To hell
A hazy green mist hung lightly over the blue-gray city buildings, while a still breeze rippled through the mild night air. The sounds of taxi’s shouting and heavy music was ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Alex
I grip the chain-link fence like it's my lifeline. The metal beneath my fingers is cold and rusted, and stings my scarred skin. A strong wind blows back my longish ...
Mar 24, 2011 -
Re: beneath the waves
Cookie! I know I read this at school, but it's still awesome! Oh by the way, reading club in Mr. Horans classroom at lunch, if you wanna come
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: The History of Time
Wow. I thought this was great! You have a talent for writing, Though the chuck at the end was kind of difficult to read, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: The History of Time
Wow. I thought this was great! You have a talent for writing, Though the chuck at the end was kind of difficult to read, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. The ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Help Wanted
This was very absorbing and compelling to read. the faded numbers 1300 were painted boldly This is the only flaw that really bugged me. If the letters were painted boldly, ...
Feb 27, 2011
