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Thank you (:

I love the feeling of the poem. You can definitely tell you in quite the mood of rage and/or hatred. Anyways, I loved it. You're a great poet. And a ...

This was a very short, heartful, to the point poem. I find it touching and free. Your rhyme scheme, is not forced at all, but I find that it disturbs ...

Noo. It was the date of which we started our relationship. So, its fresh. And I spotted that is shouldve been in at first. But thank you (: Only her ...

Thank you (:

I constantly think back to our middle school times, the moments we spent saying hi and "high-fiving" touched my heart. Look at us now babe, we are together. My dream ...

You always find a way to make me feel good babe

That is true. I couldve used better placement. I wasnt really worried about spelling though.

Alright. Thanks (: I am a very awkward person, so, that may not be repairable, but the line breakup helps a lot.

I was having trouble with this one. But tell me your thoughts...

As I wait there for hours on end, people scream and shout whether it's my name or screams and shreiks. Longing for thrills and amusement, I drown myself in hustle ...

This poem of yours gives me a great idea of the situation/nature of the character. The first half describes a great happening which I love. Then fades to what we ...

This is a very realistic and heart-touching poem. Great work. (: It really shows the reader the characters' feelings.

Great imagary. (: Keep up the great work, fellow poet. (: Review my poem?