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Hi Elephant, this is really good when read after part 1 - I'm starting to really like Kyle a lot! :D At one point when reading this piece I actually ...

I have a few comments, hope that they help. You really gripped me emotionally, really got into the head of the characters well and made me feel what they were ...

Hi Sophie, I'm new here, but I read your piece and thought I'd tell you what I think. I'm no expert, so don't take this as gospel :wink: I loved ...

I love the word 'street-pilgrims' - beautiful :) I found reading this quite sad and perhaps a little uncomfortable - there seems to be a subtle underlying conflict hidden in ...