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Hi Brian, thanks for the head's up! I don't understand the guidance ratings - in the UK we have PG, 12 and 18 only. What rating would be apropriate?:oops: Thanks ...

Any comments and feedback welcome ......? :D

Hi Elephant, this is really good when read after part 1 - I'm starting to really like Kyle a lot! :D At one point when reading this piece I actually ...

Sorry, double post, my server's acting up :oops:

It is a horrible place, this old house. The floors are soaked with rain and faeces, the windows are either dangerous jagged shards or filthy with god-knows-what. The boys have ...

I have a few comments, hope that they help. You really gripped me emotionally, really got into the head of the characters well and made me feel what they were ...

:D Sorry, I meant just meant that distinguishing between which person was doing the action was a bit hard - or I found it hard! This is probably because they ...

Hi Sophie, I'm new here, but I read your piece and thought I'd tell you what I think. I'm no expert, so don't take this as gospel :wink: I loved ...

I love the word 'street-pilgrims' - beautiful :) I found reading this quite sad and perhaps a little uncomfortable - there seems to be a subtle underlying conflict hidden in ...

The ritual of writing presses down upon her. She cannot resist it; it pulls like a blackhole. Everyday she tries to ignore it, to study or talk, or read other ...

Thanks :D ratties are lovely, promise...I'll post a pic some other time to convince you :P

Actually, I'm a lurker who's finally decided to make the effort actually use this fantastic site. I've just started my blog, Ikklebeastie's First Draft, to document the trials of writing ...

Hi I'm ikklebeastie, I'm looking forward to getting to know some of you and concentrating on my more creative side :D