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Re: Love, Awkwardness, and Moonlight: As Told by a Third Wheel
This is what I like. It's real, relatable, and very well written. I can't really say anything negative, because I couldn't find anything negative.Except for there was one part "Images ...
Aug 29, 2010 -
Re: Social Phobia
Wow, this was cool. It spoke to me, most poems don't do that. It's pretty relatable and makes sense. And I love the rhyming scheme, it's new and different and ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Princess Ben by Catherine Gilbert Murdock
Sounds good, I'll give it a try! Thanks for presenting the idea to me =] -iheartbooks♥
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Paralysed
It's definitely a new kind of story for me. I'm usually one too read the love stories or something, but I enjoyed this. I felt like I was there kind ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Deleted.. :(
Hey kakagirl! Here on request, and just to let you know, I am following you. I know, stalker, right? Anyway, first of all I'd like to say that I do ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: My Biggest Fear
My Biggest Fear “Do you remember when I was interviewing you that one time?” I asked. This was going to be hard, I’ve never done this before. And it didn’t ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Bullies: One, Losers: None, Teacher: I Don't Really Care
With binder in my hand, I head to my doom, I head to the horror, I head to the room. With converse on my feet, And a skirt to my ...
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: Letters to Cody (Part One)
I do have to say that this is only Part One and I'm trying to get the next part out as soon as possible. As for rushed, this is only ...
Aug 26, 2010 -
Re: Letters to Cody (Part One)
Day One, I had gone to camp for the past three years, so the first day I saw you that year, I didn't think anything of it. You were pastors ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: I'm Not the One Getting Hurt
I watch them, Silently, Quietly, Not bothering to say anything more. How ridiculous they look, As they flounce about, Flirting, Twirling their hair. And the boys, Because they're only that, ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Fire Girl Chapter 1
This was a good chapter, good plot, good idea. Alex seems like the good girl, like Rosey Unicorn said, a Mary Sue. Show us some flaws! Jon is perfect, on ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: A Soul To The Heavens
This is a really moving peice, bravo! I can't really say anything bad about it, it seemed all fine. The beat and rhyming all seemed fine. And so did the ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Stop Falling For My Best Friend
Wow, this is good. It would be nice to avtually hear the beat and everything, but the lyrics are nice, realiztic, and very relatable. And I liked the part about ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Bellatrix and Severus: A Love Story :smt055
I like this idea of a younger version of the older Harry Potter characters. Although, didn't Snape like Lily? Just wondering. But I like trying to picture Bellatrix in love, ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: "But an old friend"
I liked this. I know what it feels like to be stabbed in the back by a "friend". Granted, I was in fourth grade and a girl told someone who ...
Aug 16, 2010
