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I really like that third picture. I must say that I'm not very good at critiquing pictures, but for the other people that are, it would be easier to see ...

*Note, this would be a opening line for someone who's writing in a journal. "My teacher says write, so I write, alot, alot more than Allen, the jerk, she also ...

(♥ it ♥ it ♥ it ♥ it) x A MILLION!

I don't have time for a full review. But I liked it, and I didn't think it was totally info dumping. But it had good info. But I have to ...

Who knows, maybe there will be, I'll have to find out... I mean, you'll have too find out =] I'll get my creativiity going and try to think up another ...

I liked it, but just make sure that you don't capitalize seasons. And I didn't really like the placement of Fall, because for me it seemed like you were trying ...

Okay, so this isn't totally romantic, more like a...well, breakup! No duh, right? But some spots are chady, and the whole prank calling thing seems lame too me. But my ...

Hey Skins, Well, first of all I'd like to say: THANK YOU! For posting it, I needed to at least make sure he didn't, like, die! Anyway, back to the ...

Here I am, being the person who leaves hardly anything critical, so isn't really helping. I just think it's kind of funny how somebody writes their opinion on something, and ...

Because everyone has already critiqued this, I have to say one last thing. I FREAKING LOVE THIS! I started reading these chapters one at a time this morning, but was ...

Walking into that room was risky, and Karen knew it. But she couldn’t, not see him. She had waited a few days, but knew she needed to get to him ...

♥♥♥ Keep Writing! “upon my gracious entering, please help me find what I missed her on Earth." This I had to reread a few times... It was a bit confusing, ...

I can't give it a full review, but this sounds like it's going to be interesting. Certainly something differant than I usually read, but good none the less. I look ...

Butter stains my pants from where I wiped my hands on them. Mouth sticky from sugary sweets. My eyes are glued to the screen. Scary part, more popcorn. Tense scene, ...

I like the 6 year old version, it reminds me of some of the stuff I used to do. Not the whole not making sense part, but the simplicity that ...