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Re: My First Love
My muse is gone, And I see no rythym, Why am I like this? You, that's why. You came into my life, And I really wish you hadn't. They had ...
Oct 20, 2010 -
Re: Confusing
It's wonderful, The way he looks at me, Like he wants more than friendship. It's strange, The way he talks to me, Like he likes it the way we are. ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Barber
I love the simplicity. But it's totally relatable and tells us something that could otherwise take a whole page in just four lines. Bravo. It's easy to understand and I ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Tricked Chapter 2
ooh! Plot twist! I must say though that this chapter went by fast and you didn't really give much imagery, which is usually needed to have a really good peice ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: helo
Hey, I'm no good with names either. I'm iheartbooks, well, Leah, but yeah... I look forward to reading your stuff. I always like knowiing that there are people out ther ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Tricked Chapter 1
Hey Alzora. I'm iheartbooks and I'll review your story. This may be a little long, but, you know, it's a review. Umm... red is my stuff. I stepped off the ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Totally Different
I'm the cliche, In this hell they call school. I'm the nerdy girl, Ignored by the cool. I'm the one quiet, While the others are loud. I'm the one trying, ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Is the hardcover novel dead?
As much as I hate to believe it, hardcover is going down. E-books are the future, and cost less. Less to buy, less to publish. etc. etc. etc... Frankly, I ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Take A Chance- 5
Hey theotherone, One thing is, yeah, werewolves were kind of sudden. Now I'm not saying it's totally messing up the story because it is the story, right? But you can't ...
Oct 1, 2010 -
Re: Together
The air is cold and it nips at our intertwined fingers. I could say that I was shivering, except for that I wasn't. I'm warm, like usual. Maybe a little ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Why Don't I Feel Anything?
He sits by me, But never relaxes. He looks at me, But never sees. He opens his mouth, But never talks. He kisses me, But never means it. How can ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Ashes Can Cast a Spell on Me
I just saw a firefly, With long, golden hair. It gave me a small wave, And cast a spell upon my chair. So when it started to fly away, I ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming
Wow, I didn't understand it at all, lol. But since it must make sense to her then it's cute. Short, simple, and to the point. Keep writing. -iheartbooks
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: My Biggest Fear
Thank you everyone, your comments mean a lot to me. -iheartbooks
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Playing Fate
hI TheOtherOne, Well, first of all, I don't really know what to say about this. It was good, don't get me wrong there, just kind of confusing. So the beginning ...
Sep 23, 2010
