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Re: Interlochen?
Hey everyone here on YWS! I just wanted to know, is anyone here from Interlochen in northern Michigan? Either the high school, summer camps, or after high school stuff. Just ...
Jun 25, 2011 -
Re: What Killed Callie Miller?
"Love" . The word flows from her freshly scarred skin. She inhales deeply, but nothing fills her open lungs. Open. Empty , like her soul. She's just a being now. ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: A Little Thing Called Love
Thanks guys! inkwell: I'll look into punctuation. bsbfan19: thank you, I rely on emotion to write poems, so I'm glad it shows.
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: A Little Thing Called Love
Hey everyone! It's been a long while since I've actually been able to write, just getting over a bad case of Writer's Block. So, tell me what you think. Suggestions ...
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The F.U.N. Song.
Oh my gosh! I freaking love Spongebob Squarepants! Lol, this is great, but you have to admit "F is for fire that burns up the whole town, U is for ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Girlfriends and boyfriends at the age of 10 - 15
Uh, I'm not dating until I get my liscence and then can actually go on dates and drive places. And I don't even think I'll date until college, if even ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: What love does to some people
It's got good... what to call it... I'll just explain it good. This is a skeleton. It's sturdy and well-built. Now you need to add meat to the bones. The ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Are you rejecting me?
I seriously kept rereading this because I swear that this is Shakespeare writing it or something. Trully amazing. Kepp up the good work =]
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Kitten
Wow! That is really good! The only thing I can say is that the eyes look a little too spread out. And since you shaded the eyes, you should shade ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: Hi there!
Heyyy!!!! I'm Leah! One question, you said "I love sports, I'm a state level throw ball player/ I also like cooking and eating it after that." You like to eat ...
May 7, 2011 -
Re: YWS group photo!
Oohh!!! This sounds fun! Can I be in it? Brown hair, blue eyes, big glasses, pale skin, holding a pink tulip? Kind of a nerd, that would be me... If ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Bug Killer
His little legs go swish swish swish as he tries to stay afloat, I tried to make it go really fast but he floated like a boat. The water just ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: To My Stalker
Woot! Woot! Looooovvveee it! Great for your first poem on YWS, mine was lousy and probably had something to do with peanut butter. Anyway, deleted it a long time ago, ...
Apr 28, 2011 -
Re: If It Is Not Love, Then What Is It?
Immensly surprised to Feel the way I do It takes my breath away To be around you I don't know yet what Seems so obvious to others Needing another reason ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Is it because?
I liked it, I really did. The only part that kind of threw me off and made me reread it again was the third to last line. You came up ...
Mar 5, 2011
