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“Ow!” I shouted as Peony pricked me with a pin while fitting me for a dress. “Hey, at least you didn’t pass out. There was this one girl who I ...

“Wait, right here, I was right here!” yelled Allen. He seemed to be spazzing out, so I ran to catch up to him. He was running around, pointing at my ...

Since everyone already pointed out the mistakes and everything, I'll just give you my opinion on the idea... I liked it! It was of course messy in some areas that ...

I'm not really a good editor, or really even a poet, but that was good. I liked it!

“What?” I asked him and he nodded. “I swear that if it was not true I will give up my throne,” he said. “OK, are you sure that you don’t ...

(Note, she has just woken up from her flashback/dream thing) “Wake up, wake up,” I heard Jeremiah say while he shook me. I got up and I looked around to ...

(Note, she has just woken up from her flashback/dream thing) A gunshot took me back to reality. “You, slave, you need to come now,” Jeremiah said, grabbing my wrist and ...

(Note, she has just waken up from her flashback/dream thing) When I woke up the first thing I thought was, “I can’t feel my toes.” As soon as I figured ...

The January wind whips my face with cold flakes of snow that sting my pink cheeks. I look across the river and I say, “Go, just go for it.” The ...

This was a story I wrote for English. Ijust thought I'd post it and see what people think of it. Yes it's short, but that's because, once again, it was ...

Hi, So I read this chapter and I thought it was pretty good! I would defiantly suggest rereading it though. We all make our mistakes so just make sure you ...

I have to say that I really quite enjoyed that beginning, it makes someone want to keep reading. The only realy advice I can give you is to reread your ...

OK, so first of all I would like to point out to you that when someone is talking you write it like Under my breath I said "That house with ...

Oh no, thank you for the critisism! I guess I'm always one for always knowing what's happening so it's good that you pointed it out. I tried to fix it ...

The next morning I woke up at my regular wake up time, 6:30. I was so tired, but I had to go down and start the chores. I got out ...